WRITING REQUIREMENTS
UNDERGRADUATE JOURNALS AND PROJECT PAPERS (grads and honors students see modifications
below). GRADE EXPLANATIONS
"A" grade journal entry or an "A" grade project paper
looks like one of the following:
- it is a minimum of two full pages of very critically engaged writing (it
is crunchy) and it is extremely well written. Well written means it is "tight"
writing (not full of "fat"... see below), it has a clear organization,
it flows well from idea to idea, it is free from grammatical and spelling
errors. The crunchiness has been obtained through critical thinking and/or
additional research (which is cited) and/or application to your own work or
life.
- it is a minimum of three full pages of somewhat critically engaged writing
(it is providing a synthesis) and it is very well written
- it is a minimum of four full pages of very well written "summary style"
(or outline style) that is not critically engaged
"B" grade journal entry or an "B" grade project paper looks
like one of the following:
- it is a minimum of two full pages of somewhat critically engaged writing
(it is providing a synthesis) and it is well written
- it is a minimum of three full pages of well written "summary style"
(or outline style) that is not critically engaged
"C" grade journal entry or an "C" grade project paper
looks like one of the following:
- it is a minimum of two full pages of somewhat critically engaged writing
(it is providing a synthesis) but it is not very well written (it has problems
with organization and flow, grammar etc., but I can still understand what
you mean and it is clear that your ideas are valid).
- it is a minimum of three full pages of "summary style" (or outline
style) that is not critically engaged and it is not very well written
"D" grade journal entry or an "D" grade project paper looks
like one of the following:
- it is a minimum of two full pages of somewhat critically engaged writing
(it is providing a synthesis) but it is so poorly written that I have difficulty
understanding what you mean. It is not clear to me that your ideas are valid.
- it is a minimum of three full pages of "summary style" (or outline
style) that is not critically engaged and it is so poorly written that I have
difficulty understanding what you mean.
"F" grade journal entry or project paper
- does not demonstrate even a basic attempt at completing the assignment
PLAIGIARISM will result in an F in the class and you may be disciplined further,
up to expulsion from the university.
Plagiarism is defined as:
- direct quoting without citing a source and placing quotation marks around
the quote
- misrepresenting a direct quote as a paraphrase
- misrepresenting a paraphrase as your own ideas (putting someone else's
ideas in your own words without identifying the original source of those
ideas in a citation)
- these rules apply to the course text, which need only be cited as (CO,
p. X) or (Buskirk, p. X)
- these rules apply to any sources other than the course texts, which should
include a full citation (author, title, date, page or full URL)
- these rules DO NOT apply to lecture material. It is NOT NECESSARY to provide
a citation for lecture material.
GRADUATE AND HONORS' STUDENT REQUIREMENTS
- Students enrolled for graduate credit or as undergraduate honors are expected
to produce work that is VERY WELL WRITTEN and HIGHLY ENGAGED (CRUNCHY) by
the above definitions. Graduate students and Honors students do not receive
"slack" with regards to the quality of your writing and the demonstration
of critical thinking skills.
- Graduates and Honors Students are expected to do 25% more work as well.
This means that if the minimum for undergraduates is 2 pages; the minimum
for graduates and Honors Students is 2 1/2 pages.
- This applies both to journal entries and project papers.
COMMON PROBLEMS and my "code" for them.
- awk = the underlined portion is awkward/unclear
- org/flow = at this point it is no longer clear where your essay is going
- n.a.s. = not a sentence
- smiley face = you made me smile here
- check mark = indicates something that I was looking for (this is a good
thing)
- circled word = spelling error
- circled word + wd = poor word choice (usually this means you used a word
incorrectly... you meant a different word)
- tighten = remove the "fat" from this sentence/paragraph. You don't
need this many words to get your point across. You might be "padding"
your essay or you might be "rambling" on about a point you've already
made.
- crunchy = something with texture/to chew on... you've identified an inconsistency
or irony... you are using critical thinking. You have moved beyond summary
and elementary synthesis to high level of engagement. You can obtain crunchiness
through comparison and contrast (of ideas, of works of art, of lecture and
reading material) and by application (by finding an example in your own life
to relate the course material to).
- mushy = too general, details needed, examples needed
- source?=you need a citation for this, as I strongly suspect this is not
your own idea and/or not in your own words. See notes about plagiarism above
under "F" journal entry/"F" project paper
THE WRITING GRID
JOURNAL AND GENERAL WRITING CRITERIA... Please note that is a GENERAL GUIDELINE...
the page amounts listed here are EXAMPLES for your consideration. Refer to the
specific instructions for your exam and/or journal for the "actual"
page requirements.
Irrespective of number of pages (minimum and maximum); completeness and engagement
are the primary criteria I employ. Consider the following table in terms of
good/better/best and consider methods to improve your performane. Note: if you
are writing a journal and choosing from the JOURNAL MADNESS selections, make
sure to read the descriptions of how you will be graded for futher advice).
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"Page" Requirements associated with this level |
"Engagement Level" |
Ways to Improve your score WITHIN this level of engagement.
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| BEST |
MINIMUM |
Application (taking the information from one instance and
applying it to a different instance). This involves both creative thinking
and the drawing of comparative analysis. |
If you're at this level, you're implementing something from
your personal life (your major, a hobby, something) and demonstrating a
high level of personal engagement. You could also integrate outside additional
information (on-line research, for instance). Make sure to cite any outside
sources (I don't care what style, just make sure I could find it if I needed
to). Internet sources must include full URL. |
| BETTER |
SLIGHTLY MORE THAN MINIMUM (if minimum is 2 pages then you should be
doing at least 3 to receive full points).
Another option is to do MORE than the requirement number of entries.
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Synthesis (putting the information in your own words and making
comparative analyses). |
You could make sure to draw active comparisons with other
work/artists/styles in your other summaries (showing developments and influences,
for instance). You could also integrate outside additional information (on-line
research, for instance). You could also include an artist or designer you
find interesting but who was NOT covered in class or the textbook, and discuss
that artist's work along with a work that WAS covered. Make sure to cite
any outside sources (I don't care what style, just make sure I could find
it if I needed to). Internet sources must include full URL. |
| GOOD |
DOUBLE THE MINIMUM (if minimum is 2 than you should be doing at least
4 to receive full points).
Another option is to do MORE than the required number of entries.
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Summarizing (basically repeating information from class and
the textbook). While the information could (and should ideally) be placed
in your own words, comparative analyses are not being made. Each work/artist/style
covered is treated like an individual entity unrelated to other works/artists/styles. |
You could integrate outside additional information (on-line
research, for instance), or focus on more than one artist and/or artwork
in each summary (this is a way to extend the length). Make sure to cite
any outside sources (I don't care what style, just make sure I could find
it if I needed to). Internet sources must include full URL. |